(scale of 1 to 10)

1 – Shallow, Narrow, Short
10- Deep, Wide, Endless

Shallow – It’s all about ME!
Deep – It’s all about THEE!

Narrow – Limited Perspective
Wide – Unlimited Perspective

Short – Conditional: until… whatever.
(one night stand)

Endless- Unconditional: Forever.
(Life time stand)

1[ ] 2[ ] 3[ ] 4[ ] 5[ ]
6[ ] 7[ ] 8[ ] 9[ ] 10[ ]

No one is a 10 but God,
But we can strive to be like Him.

(c) 12-07-2010
This is rather cryptic. I tried to fill in
the in-between but decided to leave
it to the imagination.
It made my brain hurt.

Read more: http://hellopoetry.com/poem/dimensions-of-love/#ixzz1AhQMJ7z7


One Comment to “Dimensions of Love”

  1. admin says:

    Comments from Jello Poetry
    Chris G J Smith Dec 15, 2010
    Good impact my friend.

    John Stevens Dec 15, 2010
    It is kind of skimpy but that is the way it goes sometimes. Thanks Chris
    Louis Brown Dec 17, 2010
    Very interesting poem, John.

    John Stevens Dec 17, 2010
    One of those things I did not know how to finish.
    Neva Flores Dec 17, 2010
    definitely cryptic, but I like it!

    John Stevens Dec 17, 2010
    At a loss as to what to do with it. Skeletal at best.
    Neva Flores Dec 18, 2010
    just leave it be, sometimes someone else understands something I have written and it all makes sense to me later ;))

    John Stevens Dec 18, 2010
    I had stuff to fluff it up. but it seemed pointless.
    Thanks Neva.
    Jennifer Humphrey Dec 18, 2010
    Haven’t You heard the saying writing is never to be fluffed? I have had a few poems that I felt compelled to write something else or erase and replace. I stopped myself. Remembering in school being told…don’t change the answers. I like cryptic.


    John Stevens Dec 18, 2010
    It is cryptic. You use your imagination between 1 and 10. Thanks for the NO FLUFF

    Paddy Martin Dec 25, 2010
    I like this a lot John it answers a lot of questions and questions a lot of answers!

    John Stevens Dec 25, 2010
    Paddy! great to “see” you. How are you?
    Thanks Paddy
    raen Dec 26, 2010
    I definitely liked the contrasts you put in here, John– very thought provoking :) Thank you for sharing :)

    John Stevens Dec 26, 2010
    You are welcome raen

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