(scale of 1 to 10)

1 – Shallow, Narrow, Short
TO
10- Deep, Wide, Endless

Shallow – It’s all about ME!
Deep – It’s all about THEE!

Narrow – Limited Perspective
Wide – Unlimited Perspective

Short – Conditional: until… whatever.
(one night stand)

Endless- Unconditional: Forever.
(Life time stand)

1[ ] 2[ ] 3[ ] 4[ ] 5[ ]
6[ ] 7[ ] 8[ ] 9[ ] 10[ ]

No one is a 10 but God,
But we can strive to be like Him.

(c) 12-07-2010
This is rather cryptic. I tried to fill in
the in-between but decided to leave
it to the imagination.
It made my brain hurt.

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One Comment to “Dimensions of Love”

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    Comments from Jello Poetry
    Chris G J Smith Dec 15, 2010
    Good impact my friend.
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    John Stevens Dec 15, 2010
    It is kind of skimpy but that is the way it goes sometimes. Thanks Chris
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    Louis Brown Dec 17, 2010
    Very interesting poem, John.
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    John Stevens Dec 17, 2010
    One of those things I did not know how to finish.
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    Neva Flores Dec 17, 2010
    definitely cryptic, but I like it!
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    John Stevens Dec 17, 2010
    At a loss as to what to do with it. Skeletal at best.
    Neva Flores Dec 18, 2010
    just leave it be, sometimes someone else understands something I have written and it all makes sense to me later ;))
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    John Stevens Dec 18, 2010
    I had stuff to fluff it up. but it seemed pointless.
    Thanks Neva.
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    Jennifer Humphrey Dec 18, 2010
    Haven’t You heard the saying writing is never to be fluffed? I have had a few poems that I felt compelled to write something else or erase and replace. I stopped myself. Remembering in school being told…don’t change the answers. I like cryptic.

    Jen
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    John Stevens Dec 18, 2010
    It is cryptic. You use your imagination between 1 and 10. Thanks for the NO FLUFF

    Paddy Martin Dec 25, 2010
    I like this a lot John it answers a lot of questions and questions a lot of answers!
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    John Stevens Dec 25, 2010
    Paddy! great to “see” you. How are you?
    Thanks Paddy
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    raen Dec 26, 2010
    I definitely liked the contrasts you put in here, John– very thought provoking :) Thank you for sharing :)
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    John Stevens Dec 26, 2010
    You are welcome raen

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