by John Stevens

We still hear
your voice on the

My wife and I talk
about you
sweet man
concern for you
could be our son

She read the poem
“To: Letter Four” and
still crying – from time to time
she cares for you
so do I

She said; you are
the reason I am at
Hello Poetry:
I am here for you
how can we help you?
I am writing again – because of you

God leads us in the
path we are to
I listen
He nudges
I follow

Forgiveness of my self
begins with accepting
as I am
not as I want to be
God takes care of – the rest

(c) 10-10-10


One Comment to “To: Letter Four – D”

  1. admin says:

    From Hello Poetry
    Neva Flores Oct 11, 2010
    Beautiful write John :)

    John Stevens Oct 11, 2010
    Thanks Neva. I appreciate you. But you know that
    Nikki I Oct 11, 2010
    Very good, sir. God is always there to take care of us :)

    John Stevens Oct 11, 2010
    You are soooo right Nikki.
    Shelly Dee Oct 11, 2010
    John, this says it all…thank you

    John Stevens Oct 11, 2010
    Looking for balance. Hope I found it. Thanks Shelly.
    Mari Oct 11, 2010
    A most excellently penned write John, filled with the warm glow of friendship and the great love for a most dear friend. Your words echo care, concern and comfort for that someone so special and are so eloquently expressed. Thoughts, feelings so beautifully inked, the flow of the poem is like a chocolate fountain pouring down so majestically, encouraging inviting this dear friend to pop a marshmallow on a cocktail stick and hold it under the sweet flow, coating it in the delicious chocolate of life, eating it ravenously with a new hunger for life, with a promise that the best in life is to come yet! God helps us, of that there can be no doubt whatever, but we must first show Him that we are willing to and want to help ourselves and then, His divine help follows and there is NEVER a reason to look back with regret. Superb crafting John. A privilege to read and I thank you for sharing this wonderful work with me. Blessings, dear friend……………….

    John Stevens Oct 11, 2010
    I could have used some of that in the piece Mari. WOW! Thanks Mari
    D Conors Oct 11, 2010
    You’re writing because you’re a writer, john.
    that’s what you do.


    John Stevens Oct 11, 2010
    The last few days and weeks has been difficult to write. I write because of a thumb in my back (not my wife) nudging me to DO SOME THING. This is the result which I pray will be an encouragement.
    Truthis ALie Oct 12, 2010
    Wow , that was a touching poem.

    John Stevens Oct 13, 2010
    Thanks TA. Is a Lie – Truth?
    You tell it the way it is. Right?

    Truthis ALie Oct 13, 2010
    Yes , It’s Truth Is A Lie . Thank you for commenting on my poems !
    james robert Oct 14, 2010
    Beautiful emotional write John. Impossible to read this without being touched by it!

    John Stevens Oct 15, 2010
    Impossible to write also… Thanks James

    Paddy Martin Oct 16, 2010
    This is very different I like the format John, very personal… I agree with D writers, write.
    An old friend of mine says why clutter up your mind with it when you can put it on the page, after all what are pages for?

    John Stevens Oct 16, 2010
    Thanks Paddy
    Flower Scent Nov 4, 2010
    I just love these good words which sprinkle from your pen..keep this aura flowing……Autumn Breeze

    John Stevens Nov 4, 2010
    Thank you AB

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